Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 30, 2020
Mystic giraffes
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ReplyDeleteHey Jordan, great work! I love giraffes, they are so beautiful and it is so sad that they get poached. I can tell you have done a lot of research, well done! I love that you colour coordinated your slide to match a giraffe as well, it looks really cool. Don't forget to proofread and check for capital letters and punctuation. I hope you're having a great week. Keep up the good work. Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHey Jordan, you have got heaps of information on the giraffes, well done. I like how you have set it out on the slide, although I found the writing a wee bit hard to read, perhaps the font could be a little bigger? I really like the way you have coloured in the background in a giraffe print.
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